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Zoroark by Kanis-Major

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CONGRATULATIONS, you have been selected for my first critique! :D Ha but anyways, here's my two cents.

It's detailed and colorful. I think overall, the impact this piece has on the viewer is all very well. The poses COULD be more dynamic, but I think for the style and composition, it looks good. The shading is very distinct, you can easily identify the dimensions of the characters. The only advice I have on the shading, is maybe there could have been a little drop shadow under the little baby dood.

I also feel like the colors were a little rushed, it seems like there's a lot of spots where the color goes out of the lines, or doesn't go to the line all the way, etc. The background could have also benefited from being brighter I think. The grey background against the grey characters muddies things a tad.

The only reason "originality" is so low is because this is fan-art. You're not really seeking out to do something original anyways. xD You just wanted to draw some cute pokemon.

Really though, fun piece. I hope to see more :)
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Kanis-Major Nov 15, 2012   General Artist
Thanks for the critique.
I did choose a grey background to keep in the colour scheme. But I can see what you're getting at.
Lol, I did go through "cleaning" up the colouring but I left those because they're not very distinct. LAZY.
Anyway, thanks again for the critique!
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